Olsent10 wrote:Checked out your website, it's painful to read because of the grammatical errors. It needs some serious editing. ***Tip - type it in Microsoft word before you post it on the web.***
Extract from your website about the lure scents.
Why TB2F lure scent?
TB2F lure scent has been designed for Aussie fish.
We spent months designing our scent and making our sent to be the best, using Australian products so its designed for Aussie fish. The aim was always to use Australian products to support local company's, when you purchase our scent you know its 100% Australian made lure scent. So grab some TB2F lure scent and have some fun catching fish, from freshwater to salt water you will have the unfair advantage over the others fishing.
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Why TB2F lure scent?
TB2F lure scent has been designed for Australian fish.
We spent months designing our scent and making our scent to be the best using Australian products so its designed for Australian fish. The aim was always to use Australian products, to support local company's. When you purchase our scent, you know its 100% Australian made lure scent. So grab some TB2F lure scent and have some fun catching fish, from freshwater to salt water you will have the unfair advantage over the others fishing.
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Product testing has shown the scent lasts for least 5/6 cast when flicking, and trolling we would recommend replying in roughly 30 to 40 min if you wish to do so to top up the scent.
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Product testing has shown the scent lasts for atleast 5/6 cast when flicking, and trolling, we would recommend reapplying roughly every 30 to 40 mins if you wish to do so to top up the scent.
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nah, the above is a correction for the corrector! Not the op.